A lot of the time it's how you say it. Whether your tone or having a smile on your face -- it makes the big difference. |
His face was all bloody. He had blood coming from his nose and mouth, and he was flopping (on the ground). |
It's amazing. We couldn't even afford an extra $50 in our bank account at that point. |
No matter how small the improvement, all (the coaches) are looking for is for everyone to do their best. |
our worst fears are coming true twice. |
The breach in the 17th Street canal is about 200 feet (60 meters) wide, |
The breach in the 17th Street canal is about 200 feet (60 meters) wide, ... The water is going to keep coming in until it reaches the level of the lake. I don't know what they are going to do. |
The meet was so exciting. It seemed like all of the kids were breaking their personal best records. |
The water is going to keep coming in until it reaches the level of the lake. I don't know what they are going to do, |
There is no population in there. It's deserted. |
There will probably be some double-takes as she's obviously the Miss Hoolie the children have seen on television.They'll be like 'why aren't you on stage? |
This is more exciting than Disneyland. |
We're getting a little more Rita than we wanted to get, |
Your language is really vivid. It was a lot to take in. What would you do to revise it? |